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Title: Holokauston
Pairing: Al/Wrath
Genre: Angst-angst-angst. It eats you.
Spoilers: MOVIE spoilers!
Words: ~280
Notes: My religious symbolism fixation spreads.
...and DAMN, do I need to go to bed. WTF.



Like a lamb to the slaughter.

Wrath had heard that metaphor once before-- Dante laughing over how easy it had been to bait the golden boy to this place of deep darkness years before-- but he hadn't understood it until he saw it, saw the blond alchemist walk into the grand ballroom with a dumbstruck expression, all but bleating. He had known the dangers and possible death he'd face at the end of his journey, but he'’d come anyway-- eagerly, even...like a lamb to the slaughter, a self-sent sacrifice to be offered up in the place of his brother.

And in the end, it seemed that that was exactly what had happened; the ram was marked with blood and burnt, the smoke rising to heaven like a prayer.


What kind of stupid creature would walk willingly and calmly to its own violent, brutal death?


Like a lamb...
Wrath led the way down the endless stairs spiraling into the ancient shadows, and each footfall was a voluntary choice, a renewed affirmation that he knew very well where he was going, he knew intimately what demons that lie dreaming in the deep he'd face...
...and he knew every stair was one more step on a decent into death.


Al kept one warm hand resting on the Sin's shoulder as a guide in the dark, trusting him completely... innocent of this place and what happened here, though it was in this empty city, screaming its dead silence, that he was reborn through the flesh and blood offerings of his beloved brother.

"Why did you bring me to this place?"
Steadily down, the pace never slacking. "Don't worry about it."


This was his day of atonement.

Date: 2005-10-19 06:34 am (UTC)
swordage: rotf Soundwave (screaming - Ishbal)
From: [personal profile] swordage
*whiiiiiine* It hurts, Daddy.

Date: 2005-10-19 08:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yuuo.livejournal.com
::whines:: ;_; Oh lovely. I love the imagry painted about the scene in ep 51- I actually forget sometimes that Wrath was there. XD; I didn't even think about the parallels of him heading down for a willing self-sacrifice there. >_> I dunno what sense Izumi beat into him, but it worked. *_;

Date: 2005-10-19 02:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lykomancer.livejournal.com
I forget what parts of those last episodes Wrath was visiblely there, but it's good enough for government work. >.>
I hadn't realized when I started to write how much Ed's sacrifice was going to play into this-- really, I was just trying to make that a sidebar and then it grew and the fic shrank so... Yeah.

Mostly, this came about because of doing that icon meme for [livejournal.com profile] kaitou_marina; she had the same Wrath icon, but her keywords on it was "sacrificial lamb"...and my brain went "s;lkdhkdflkgj~! YES!"

Date: 2005-10-19 08:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultrasushi.livejournal.com
;_; God, that was wonderful... AL/WRATH OTP!!!

Date: 2005-10-19 02:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lykomancer.livejournal.com
AL/WRATH OTP! *bondage...I MEAN, BONDING! bondING! Yes...*

Date: 2005-10-19 02:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultrasushi.livejournal.com
*Spits tea all over keyboard* LMAO!! XD

Date: 2005-10-19 10:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wiccat.livejournal.com
Aw... go Wrath! He really is like Bizarro!Ed XD

Date: 2005-10-19 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaitou-marina.livejournal.com
*gnaws on the fic in pure love*

It's wonderful, absolutely wonderful. I adore adore ADORE symbolism like this. I am, in fact, a whore for it XDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Sorry I don't have something more articulate to say. I was just thinking it's just a lovely little fic <3

Date: 2005-10-19 08:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lykomancer.livejournal.com
YAY!
I'm glad you like it, since you inspired this weird little drabble.
I actually was expecting it to be longer and more detailed, but in the end, I'm happy with it as is.

(Man, the majority of my writing comes out like this. Expecially my Hoheheim drabbly-things. *sighs*)

Date: 2005-10-23 12:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maxxim-huzzah.livejournal.com
Of all the Sins in the anime, Wrath was the one who had an idea of what exchange would mean. I'd quote everything from this drabble, b/c it's that poetic. *wants to eat Al/Wrath OTP* You are feeding this addiction, oh noes!

Date: 2005-10-24 10:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rosalyn-nation.livejournal.com
*poke* This is Anne, from the 90's. If you remember me... The one with the red hair.

Date: 2005-10-24 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] empty-geas.livejournal.com
It took me forever to get around to reading this and I wish I'd done it a lot sooner. The cyclic nature of events, Wrath shadowing Ed's steps, walking the same path, but far more darkly and knowingly then Ed could because he knows how things will end, and the precious candle-flicker of Al's unknowing/innocence against both the metaphorical dark of knowing and the physical dark they're moving through is wonderful. And it's all woven together so well, bright-dark glimpses of motives, past and present, and memories binding together the events of then with those about to unfold, highlighting the overlays and differences. I like the slight off-shift that Al is the one to follow lamb-trusting and Wrath, aware and suspicious as any wolf, is the one who will serve as a sacrifice.
A very lovely inversion of events and an excellent story.

Date: 2005-10-29 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] forgottenlover.livejournal.com
oh shit youch

Date: 2005-11-08 09:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ryshili.livejournal.com
*grabbies at Lyko* you fill my Wrath/Al need... ;.; I watched an AMV about Wrath fighting Glut. ;.; i cry.

such a pretty piece ^_^ like always... *beg* MOOOOORE

Date: 2005-11-17 06:23 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
It was pretty good! Short...but good!

Date: 2005-12-13 12:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] momoiro-usagi.livejournal.com
Ahhh!! An AlxWrath fan! ^^ I love you to bits! *goes to search journal for more fan fiction* This piece was brilliant...I love the allegory! aww, poor Wrath!

If you're interested, I've started a [livejournal.com profile] al_x_wrath community, and I'm looking for members! ^^ I really hope you'll consider submitting this and anything else you might have.

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