This is coming along wonderfully. Al's confusion and the barrier he instinctively raised against memory. Envy's helpless dependency on his help in those first brief moment's of aftermath followed by his joy in suffering that was cut all to short by dawning realization that Ed was really gone, was intriguing to witness. It'll be interesting to see what excuse he comes up with for letting Al live 'just a little longer.' Keep up the great work and good luck with the rest of it.
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Date: 2005-09-22 11:00 pm (UTC)