Man, usually people fuck up this pairing until it's something that can't be read *coughFF.netcough*, but HOLY GOD it was such a lovely and lyrical way of writing that I really felt something. ^___^ I liked Wrath's odd perceptiveness in the face of Al's typical naivete, and the fact that he acted like what he was - a wild animal that couldn't be tamed.
Guh. I just have much love for this. So much. *mems* Characterization and prose were spot-on, and I don't think you abused the Bible all that much.
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Date: 2005-09-07 05:58 am (UTC)Guh. I just have much love for this. So much. *mems* Characterization and prose were spot-on, and I don't think you abused the Bible
all that much.